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 | Subject: Mooring  Thu Jun 28, 2012 2:54 pm | |
| This is an apology to the one I love for my rash actions. Mooring
In the darkest nights
A lonely ship sails
Battered by monstrous waves
And struggled with a splinting hull.
Its sails are tattered
Its rudder a narrow nub
But up ahead a glimmer
A home where it longs to halt.
So will you let it moor
And be safe in these calm waters
And forgive it
For all the times it has gone astray
For now after so long
It has found its way
Back to a safe mooring
A place it call its home
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| | Subject: Re: Mooring Thu Jun 28, 2012 3:46 pm | |
| This is way better than my poems. But I'll have some stuff to say: Forgive is not spaced out.  You taught me a new word. (mooring) You used "its" correctly.  Other than that, I don't really have anything to say. xD |
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| | Subject: Re: Mooring Thu Jun 28, 2012 8:19 pm | |
| Hehe thanks, just fixed it. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Mooring Thu Jun 28, 2012 10:25 pm | |
| Very nice, I'm sure you are forgiven | |
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| | Subject: Re: Mooring Thu Jun 28, 2012 10:30 pm | |
| Thank you Brook, I hope I am. | |
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